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摘自《2021考研英语高分写作考前猜测20篇》
（王江涛编著，浙江教育出书社）
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主张信
directions:
you arestudying at university and one of your lecturers has asked his students towrite and suggest ways in which he could improve his teaching.
??? write an email to the lecturer. say the wayyou enjoy about his lectures and suggest how they could be improved.
猜测范文?
dear professor byron,
last week you asked students to write and give you feedback on?your lectures.?therefore, i have outlined my thoughts below.
in general, i find your lectures very informative and inspiring. indeed, i particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. this makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. however, i do feel that you could provide us with more?handouts,?as i often don’t have time to?take down all the important points.?i would also like to see more?discussion work,?as i find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.
i’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ?yours sincerely,
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?li ming
参阅译文?
尊敬的拜伦教授：
上星期您要肄业生写信告诉您关于您课程的反应。因而，我已列明我的主意如下。
言而总之，我发现您的课程信息量大、令人煽动。实际上，我非常喜爱您运用简略图像来阐明凌乱疑问的方法。这使得您的课程既风趣又令人形象深化。可是，因为我常常没时刻记下一切的要害，我的确感到您能给咱们供给更多的打印讲义。因为我发现课堂谈论是弄清和加深我对课程内容了解的最佳方法，因而我想有更多的课堂谈论。
非常谢谢您对学生的重视，等待您的下次课程。
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ??????????您真挚的，
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? 李明
亮点词汇?
professor教授 feedback反应 lecture讲座 outline列明 thought主意 below如下 in general言而总之 informative信息量大的 inspiring令人煽动的 indeed实际上 particularly非常 demonstrate阐明 complex凌乱的 issue疑问 simple简略的 drawing图像? memorable令人形象深化的 do的确 handout打印讲义 take down记下 discussion谈论 method办法 suitable最佳的 clarify弄清 deepen加深 understanding了解 subject课程 content内容?
道长点评?
主张信首段应标明写作意图，扼要介绍自个，留心口气，切勿罗嗦。
次段应关于情况提出具体主张或劝告，应首要必定利益，再写需要改进，否则对方认为是投诉而非建。尾段应总结主张，留心礼貌原则。主张信很简略写成谈论文，应时刻思考读者感触，给对方提主张时常常说到i和you。
经典句型?
1.?i am writingthe letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards yourmajor.
我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的主张。
2.?i hope youfind these proposals useful.
我期望您发现这些主张有用。
3.?i trust you will take my suggestions intoaccount.
我信赖您会思考我的主张。
02
? ? ?谢谢信? ? ?
directions:
write to one of yourfriends, jia baoyu, express your thanks to his warm reception.?
参阅范文?
dear baoyu,
thank you very much for those five wonderful days in your house! every moment was delight. i can’t remember ever having enjoyed myself so thoroughly elsewhere.
this is to tell you again how very much i enjoyed the weekend in hangzhou. everything was just perfect: the weather, the company, the beautiful surroundings—no wonder i’m finding it difficult to get down to reading this morning! the classroom seems so dull and prosaic after hangzhou.
i hope you know how much i appreciate your hospitality, and your many kindnesses to me. i count myself fortunate indeed to have such generous and charming friend like you. ihope something will bring you to beijing soonso that i canreciprocate your kindness.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?yours,
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? li ming
参阅译文?
宝玉：
非常谢谢让我在你们家度过那么夸姣的五天！在那里的每一刻都令人高兴，我记不起还有啥当地比在那里过的更愉马上。
我得向您再说一下，在杭州度过的周末是多么令人开心啊！那里的悉数都是一无是处的——气候，友人，美丽的环境。难怪今日上午坐下来读书感触是那么不舒畅，正本在杭州过了几天之后，课堂显得那么单调无聊。
我想让你晓得，关于你的款待和美意，我非常感谢。我有你这么热心心爱的兄弟，的确很走运。期望不久你能有机缘到北京来，使我能答谢你的美意。
??????????????????????????????????????????李明
亮点词汇?
wonderful夸姣的 house家 moment时刻 delight高兴的 remember记起 ever早年 thoroughly完全的 elsewhere其他当地 weekend周末 perfect完满的 weather气候 company友人 surrounding环境 no wonder难怪 get down坐下来 dull单调的 prosaic普通的 appreciate谢谢 hospitality款待kindness美意 count认为 fortunate走运的 indeed的确 generous热心的 charming心爱的 reciprocate答谢?
道长点评?
谢谢信首要应向对方标明诚挚的谢谢，其次回想高兴韶光并表达你的感触，最终期望有机缘酬谢对方的好心和协助。
经典句型?
1.?this is to thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and to tellyou how much i enjoyed seeing you again.?
再次谢谢你的美意款待，再次见到你我是多么高兴。
2.??i don’t know when ihave had such a delightful weekend as this one.
我不记住是不是曾像这次相同高兴地度过周末。
3.?you must give me the chance to return your kindnesswhen you visit here.
期望你能莅临我处，使我能答谢你的美意。
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